Selfie story

The chase

by  harry ward

Today was a normal day for me.  I started with a refreshing  cup of coffee and some free range eggs. Then Slowly I headed  towards the door and at that moment I realised the cops were heading towards my apartment . Rapidly my brain went into escape mode, all I could think of was to jump out the window. Batman made it look easy so how hard could it be? Three, two , one ,  Smash, bang, crash as I  started to fall closer to the hard concrete ground. Splat! I hit the  ground and my neighbours dog. ‘Sorry ‘ I  blurted out

as I zoomed away . ‘Where will I hide , where will I go’ I whisper to myself as I  rush  towards the town . Suddenly I arrived at the town I tuck down behind a wall  waiting to be caught . I guess if I stay here  and they don't find me after about 2 days I go to another town and change my identity. I wait and wait and somehow they didn't find me so I was free for the rest of my life.

My pond story

Upgraded Writing

Our writing challenge this week was to turn a simple passage into descriptive piece of writing using the following criteria. We worked with a buddy to create our masterpiece.

1. There  was a little pond .

2. It was a hot day.

3. Along came a frog.

4. The frog hopped onto a Lily pad.

5. He fell asleep.

6. A heron was flying by.

7. He spotted the frog.

8. The bird dived down.

9. The sound woke the frog.

10. He moved out of the way.

11. The heron fell into the pond.

12. A pike was swimming by.

13 The fish opened her mouth

14. She swallowed the bird.

15. On the riverbank was a fisherman.

16. In his hand was a fishing rod.

Criteria:UP  LEVELLING  IS  TRYING TO IMPROVE A SIMPLE PIECE OF WRITING BY USING LOTS OF DIFFERENT METHODS  - ADJECTIVES -ADVERBS -DESCRIPTIVE PHRASES - SIMILES – METAPHORS - PERSONIFICATION  - CONNECTIVES - CONJUNCTIONS - SENTENCE OPENERS - WIDE RANGE OF INTERESTING VOCABULARY …





The uncontrollable crazy frog

At the end of a rainbow was a pond and in the pond The crazy uncontrollable frog waddled on the leaves that lay in the little pond.

The crazy frog Jeff was feeling very  hot as the super swag sun was shooting hot beams at him.The leaf started to sink and Jeff panicked so he jumped onto the lily pad where he fell asleep.

Greg the heron flew by and spotted Jeff the crazy frog. Greg swooped down at million miles per hour and  the swoosh woke Jeff up Greg  and he moved luckily before Greg asked “got any grapes”.

Greg the heron was feeling super dizzy and boom he fell into the pond. While Greg was underwater he spotted bob the pike swimming by, Bob opened his giant jaw and gobbled Greg up and Greg was never to be seen. On the bank stood a creature that looked like a man he Stood in amazement  watching it all. the man was holding a stick with a purple frog on it maybe it was a fishing rod?

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We put on the BRAKE seeing the BAKER, will praying AMEN and stroking my MANE, then  the CARS made a SCAR.

The LAMB had lip BALM at LAST he got the flavour SALT.

The STREAM MASTER had as SEAM that was the SAME.

The NAILS stopped the SNAIL and SENT it to the NETS.

We TAME the TEAM while eating MEAT , LEMONS and MELONS.

My booktrack story