Upgraded Writing
Our writing challenge this week was to turn a simple passage into descriptive piece of writing using the following criteria. We worked with a buddy to create our masterpiece.
1. There was a little pond .
2. It was a hot day.
3. Along came a frog.
4. The frog hopped onto a Lily pad.
5. He fell asleep.
6. A heron was flying by.
7. He spotted the frog.
8. The bird dived down.
9. The sound woke the frog.
10. He moved out of the way.
11. The heron fell into the pond.
12. A pike was swimming by.
13 The fish opened her mouth
14. She swallowed the bird.
15. On the riverbank was a fisherman.
16. In his hand was a fishing rod.
Criteria:UP LEVELLING IS TRYING TO IMPROVE A SIMPLE PIECE OF WRITING BY USING LOTS OF DIFFERENT METHODS - ADJECTIVES -ADVERBS -DESCRIPTIVE PHRASES - SIMILES – METAPHORS - PERSONIFICATION - CONNECTIVES - CONJUNCTIONS - SENTENCE OPENERS - WIDE RANGE OF INTERESTING VOCABULARY …
The uncontrollable crazy frog
At the end of a rainbow was a pond and in the pond The crazy uncontrollable frog waddled on the leaves that lay in the little pond.
The crazy frog Jeff was feeling very hot as the super swag sun was shooting hot beams at him.The leaf started to sink and Jeff panicked so he jumped onto the lily pad where he fell asleep.
Greg the heron flew by and spotted Jeff the crazy frog. Greg swooped down at million miles per hour and the swoosh woke Jeff up Greg and he moved luckily before Greg asked “got any grapes”.
Greg the heron was feeling super dizzy and boom he fell into the pond. While Greg was underwater he spotted bob the pike swimming by, Bob opened his giant jaw and gobbled Greg up and Greg was never to be seen. On the bank stood a creature that looked like a man he Stood in amazement watching it all. the man was holding a stick with a purple frog on it maybe it was a fishing rod?
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